We have discussed with both our teachers the things that they think we could improve on if we were to re-film. For this reason, we have decided to film the following again:
- the shot/reverse shot sequence - closer, less gap between characters
- the focus pulling shot at the start of the sequence - quicker
- a section of dialogue between the victim and the attacker (e.g. "What do you want?")
- close up of attacker's face - reflim room entry
- possible two shot of attacker and victim
- phone sequence (including a shot of him raising the phone to his ear.)
- eyeline match with evidence board - photo of attacker
We also need to rethink our props, as we have one poster on the wall which seems to grab more attention than we originally intended it to. We are going to use an evidence board instead so that there is more to look at.
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