Summary of Our Initial Storyline

Opening

Attacker/Victim sequence

Cross cutting between a doctor (victim) and an unknown attacker

Cuts show various ECUs of victim and attacker

At the peak of pace increase through the cross cutting, the victim is murdered

Murder is not seen as it cuts away at the point of murder

Ends with a zoom out, long shot of the body.

Synopsis

Office worker is murdered

Leads to an investigation

Victim turns out to be an ex-police officer

He was undercover in the attacker's gang

The gang set out to kill all undercover officers involved with them previously

After gun fight, officer gets shot in the leg

Gang are able to escape